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Climbing Over Doubt
I could easily fall for you
I'm probably halfway there
you would be one of the few
able to light my heart like a flare
But I can feel some lingering doubt
mixing things up inside of your heart
if certain intentions could bring any clout
please give me some clue how I should start
I'm probably halfway there
you would be one of the few
able to light my heart like a flare
But I can feel some lingering doubt
mixing things up inside of your heart
if certain intentions could bring any clout
please give me some clue how I should start
Written by
13blueyes13
(michael g m)
Published 11th Nov 2012
| Edited 6th Aug 2017
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re: Re: When in doubt
12th Nov 2012 2:11am
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re: Re: When in doubt
12th Nov 2012 2:44pm
Re: When in doubt
I hope this poem removes any remaining doubt! What a lovely expression of feelings for this woman; but I would assume she now knows what your intentions are.
Oh yeah, you did it again! You're poem not only reads pretty, it looks pretty cool! Hmmm, are you sure you're not doing that on purpose?
Oh yeah, you did it again! You're poem not only reads pretty, it looks pretty cool! Hmmm, are you sure you're not doing that on purpose?
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re: Re: When in doubt
12th Nov 2012 11:15pm
Okay, okay! You are correct...guess you had me all figured out. I can be a little anal retentive when writing. But only if I can do it without changing the context of the poem; and if it doesn't take too much time. But I thank you anyway for the kind words.
Re: When in doubt
14th Nov 2012 5:19am
Like a warm blanket on a cold sleepiness night. One that doesn't judge but holds her tight.
Even with new words, this means the world - no voice necessary.
Even with new words, this means the world - no voice necessary.
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re: Re: When in doubt
I retract what I said in this comment earlier. Once again it seems I misunderstood what you meant. I swear...I ought to just have my dick lopped off.
Re: When in doubt
14th Nov 2012 5:30pm
...scrolled down to comment on what a lovely poem this is, incredibly sweet and romantic.. only to become pleasantly entertained by the last sentence of the banter. (turning away now, in respect to your privacy, lol). It is a nice poem!
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Re: When in doubt
14th Nov 2012 5:57pm
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22nd Nov 2012 4:45pm
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23rd Nov 2012 3:03pm