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She still desires
She still desires
The things they did,
When she was his
That feeling inside,
When she was tied
She still desires
To be on her knees
She is submissive
She needs to please
She still desires
The taste of lust
The blissful feeling
When he thrusts
She still desires
Her cheeks to glow
She know that desire
Will never go
She also desires
The other things
The hope that
New love can bring
The things they did,
When she was his
That feeling inside,
When she was tied
She still desires
To be on her knees
She is submissive
She needs to please
She still desires
The taste of lust
The blissful feeling
When he thrusts
She still desires
Her cheeks to glow
She know that desire
Will never go
She also desires
The other things
The hope that
New love can bring
Published 31st Oct 2012
| Edited 1st Nov 2012
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31st Oct 2012 11:27pm
31st Oct 2012 11:29pm
Thanks again. i have just changed it to the third person.. I think it is more effective.
1st Nov 2012 3:13am
5th Nov 2012 1:00am
