because i want to

Thank you, Gabriel.  I appreciate that so much!

Lovely picture.  Fits the poem perfectly.  But:  "Who could blame me?"  I could.  Other people can.  Sure the poem is passionate, but it sounds like displaced passion.  "I feel the chemistry at work too," has to go.  It's a bit on the trite side, like a TV sit-com.  Take the above for what it's worth, probably nothing.  You are a good poet, with remarkable skills.  You just did not show me enough of them in this one particular poem.  Thank you for sharing a bit of you with me, though.  I'm the better for it.  And thanks for commenting on some of my poetry.  I really appreciate that, and you.


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Thanks for your feedback.  Well, maybe this isn't one of my best poems but I still like it the way it is.  Nobody's perfect, especially me.  You are, of course, entitled to your opinion and to not like the poem if that is the case.  I completely understand.  My best wishes to you always.

Simple, passionate and sincere. I like how you bare yourself. Nice poem:)

Thank you for your wonderful remarks.  I appreciate them so much!

another sexy little word angel, hon. love your take on this topic "love". you throw them out like they just roll off the tongue, and i think it's lovely how they read that way too...

i'm coming back for a second cry.

xoxo
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I'm so honored by your wonderful remarks...thank you for making my day!

We DO have a choice in love... when we understand the difference between attraction and love. Very nice!

Thank you, Ken!