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Pressure
Watch me
I may explode
Gushes of blood
Out my nose
The pipes are expanding
Might burst soon
There lies my doom
My dreadful doom
A blood balloon
The pressure builds inside
It must drop
Or I might
Die
I may explode
Gushes of blood
Out my nose
The pipes are expanding
Might burst soon
There lies my doom
My dreadful doom
A blood balloon
The pressure builds inside
It must drop
Or I might
Die
Published 10th Oct 2012
| Edited 14th Oct 2012
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14th Oct 2012 5:48pm
"Gushes" You mean on L3?
A very interesting poem, was your muse your idiopathic thrombopenia?
AlwaysCaliban
A very interesting poem, was your muse your idiopathic thrombopenia?
AlwaysCaliban
14th Oct 2012 5:56pm
No, I had a nosebleed on wednesday that lasted 2 hours, it has happened before. Anyway the ER docs thought I had High Blood Pressure, I did to at the time, but my normal docs think it was my ITP and whether change. I wrote this when I thought I had High Blood Pressure
14th Oct 2012 6:38pm
I'm very glad you do not have HBP, that would be one more thing to worry about. Stop by and read my new poem ^_^
14th Oct 2012 7:20pm
