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Path
What is life
Its a path chosen by destiny
Do you believe in your step
I dont always follow
my heart throbs just thinking about the future
is my future total darkness
I dont want to gain anything from losing
in life their always sacrifice
am I ready for it
dont I believe that i can follow the path
life is so simple when you walk alone
dont ask for no one hands
you will just lose it in the path to destiny
Its a path chosen by destiny
Do you believe in your step
I dont always follow
my heart throbs just thinking about the future
is my future total darkness
I dont want to gain anything from losing
in life their always sacrifice
am I ready for it
dont I believe that i can follow the path
life is so simple when you walk alone
dont ask for no one hands
you will just lose it in the path to destiny
Published 9th Oct 2012
| Edited 10th Oct 2012
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10th Oct 2012 00:21am
Simple but meaningful write. I think you meant to put "throbs" instead of throb. And your I's should be capitalized
Other then that pretty good
Other then that pretty good
