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i count the minutes
i count the minutes
as they tick by
one at a time
i am lonesome
for you, my darling
whose life is over
never will i gaze
into your eyes
nor see your smile
no, not again
how shall i go on
will my pain cease
my heart beats slowly
the hours seem long
you would want me
smiling as in life
remembering
all the good times
darling, you know
they were all good times
as they tick by
one at a time
i am lonesome
for you, my darling
whose life is over
never will i gaze
into your eyes
nor see your smile
no, not again
how shall i go on
will my pain cease
my heart beats slowly
the hours seem long
you would want me
smiling as in life
remembering
all the good times
darling, you know
they were all good times
Published 25th Sep 2012
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25th Sep 2012 10:20am
I have been there Faith, I know that pain it tore me apart.
Poignant wonderful write.
Poignant wonderful write.
25th Sep 2012 5:20pm
25th Sep 2012 5:35pm
Brillant as always, it always comes down to time
Time is to short
Cheers
Zenith
Time is to short
Cheers
Zenith
28th Sep 2012 4:55pm
Thank you for your wonderful remarks, Zenith. You always say such lovely things :)
