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I hate you
i loved you
I really did
But you pushed me
Too godamn far
So fuck off bastard
Go die in a hole
Bleed your heart out in paper
I dont give a fuck anymore
You screwed yourself over
And begged my forgiveness
Too many times
But im done
With this shit
Im walking away
I hope you commit suicide
And the world gives you hell
Because even if i hate you
In a cut off your head with a toothbrush
Kind of way
I still find that i love you
And that kills my soul
I really did
But you pushed me
Too godamn far
So fuck off bastard
Go die in a hole
Bleed your heart out in paper
I dont give a fuck anymore
You screwed yourself over
And begged my forgiveness
Too many times
But im done
With this shit
Im walking away
I hope you commit suicide
And the world gives you hell
Because even if i hate you
In a cut off your head with a toothbrush
Kind of way
I still find that i love you
And that kills my soul
Published 23rd Sep 2012
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23rd Sep 2012 7:31pm
A powerful vent here, it's good to bleed in ink, such a better way to release. :)
24th Sep 2012 12:45pm
29th Sep 2012 2:34am
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i felt the steam from the vent; fiery & hot
brutal write
condolences to that soul
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i felt the steam from the vent; fiery & hot
brutal write
condolences to that soul
.
.
5th Oct 2012 00:57am
Damn this fantastic from beginning to end. It's exactly how i feel about my last ex..
"Because even if i hate you
In a cut off your head with a toothbrush
Kind of way
I still find that i love you
And that kills my soul"
This ending, my dear, is truly epic. I'll be looking out for your new poems in the future.
"Because even if i hate you
In a cut off your head with a toothbrush
Kind of way
I still find that i love you
And that kills my soul"
This ending, my dear, is truly epic. I'll be looking out for your new poems in the future.
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