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The Rhythm
broken hearts
still beat
their disconjointed
rhythm
one half beats
then the other
or quarter maybe
depending on
your injury
But
broken hearts
still beat
because something
still has to spread
the poison.
still beat
their disconjointed
rhythm
one half beats
then the other
or quarter maybe
depending on
your injury
But
broken hearts
still beat
because something
still has to spread
the poison.
Published 28th Apr 2010
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7th May 2010 8:15pm
i like that last line it really say's something about the person who wrote this poem. it shows that no matter how much your heart hurts it is still beating.
Anonymous
22nd Sep 2011 12:15pm
and rythmn brilliant here...
Blue Skies
Al
Blue Skies
Al
11th Mar 2012 2:23am
I agree, and its emphasized with the way the words are places on the paper (screen ;) ) its perfect!
