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Meet You Under the Rain
We were to meet,
For one last goodbye.
And it seemed Mother Nature,
She mirrored my mood.
The clouds were dark and dreary;
They matched my inner turmoil.
As if it couldn't get any worse,
--it began to rain.
One would think this melancholy.
Well it was--for a mere moment.
Until I was engulfed in a hug,
And suddenly--
participating in the most romantic kiss of my life.
A depressing moment,
turned...
Unforgettable.
For one last goodbye.
And it seemed Mother Nature,
She mirrored my mood.
The clouds were dark and dreary;
They matched my inner turmoil.
As if it couldn't get any worse,
--it began to rain.
One would think this melancholy.
Well it was--for a mere moment.
Until I was engulfed in a hug,
And suddenly--
participating in the most romantic kiss of my life.
A depressing moment,
turned...
Unforgettable.
Published 27th Apr 2010
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28th Apr 2010 1:36am
That was definitely and unexpected twist!
keep them on their toes.
The happiness of the last line blows away the melancholy of the rest of the poem... Until you remember, it is their last goodbye.
I loved this.
keep them on their toes.
The happiness of the last line blows away the melancholy of the rest of the poem... Until you remember, it is their last goodbye.
I loved this.
8th Jul 2010 3:03pm
Yeah it is sad, but...unforgettable. :)
Thank you for the wonderful comment, I appreciate it! Truly.
Thank you for the wonderful comment, I appreciate it! Truly.
30th Jun 2014 4:32am
