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A Love Forsaken


 
He always put himself first
I always feared the worst
No love from the one that mattered
 
Falling apart and hot-tempered
Defeated by harsh expectations
A decline in health and appearance
Bruised and battered
Scarred and shattered
Losing this mental battle
Changed; ...a love forever tainted
 
No advice on life's challenges
No guidance given
Kept in the dark, well-hidden
 
Abused and weakened
Lonely and  misguided  
Alone and forgotten  
Left cold and shaken
Stripped bare; ...a love broken
 
Wanting only the chance ..to love
Wicked; ....a Love forsaken
 
 

 
Written: 27-Jul-06
Written by Jordanne (RubixCube)
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