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Gyru
Hello Mother
Hello Father
Here I am
I'm such a bother
I would choke you
And then I'd throw
In the ditch
For maggots to eat
Oh yes you know this
I know you do
And I will let you
Know the truth
So won't you let me
Show you
To the door
Before I take your lives
Hello Father
Here I am
I'm such a bother
I would choke you
And then I'd throw
In the ditch
For maggots to eat
Oh yes you know this
I know you do
And I will let you
Know the truth
So won't you let me
Show you
To the door
Before I take your lives
Published 30th Aug 2012
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Anonymous
31st Aug 2012 1:38am
This is a good start, you've got a muse. That's what every poet needs, i'd work on this a bit more, try and divide it into stanza's of 4, helps me put my poetry in a easier light.. - Vegan.
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28th Feb 2013 2:31am
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2nd Oct 2013 10:50am
The degree of feeling can't be denied here. My "enquiring mind" leaves me wondering what the back story that produce the hostility would look like, since I have no idea if this is fiction or non.
