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Lost in Deception
Lurking in the muddy shallow
I see the expression of her face
I see through her deepest fears
Every drop of tears
Come into a puzzle
I can't figure out
The brushing of the leaves
In the trees
Remind of her hair
When it blows in the wind
She cries in her mind
for a sign to help her
The clouds roll in to
Her smile that no longer shows
The lighting strikes and her hurricane blows
Lost in deception she is now
I see the expression of her face
I see through her deepest fears
Every drop of tears
Come into a puzzle
I can't figure out
The brushing of the leaves
In the trees
Remind of her hair
When it blows in the wind
She cries in her mind
for a sign to help her
The clouds roll in to
Her smile that no longer shows
The lighting strikes and her hurricane blows
Lost in deception she is now
Published 28th Aug 2012
| Edited 31st Aug 2012
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Anonymous
30th Aug 2012 6:43pm
I really like this-your poetry is improving all the time!
i don't get the bit -
She cries in her mind
for sign to help her
Great job :-)
peace, Miki
i don't get the bit -
She cries in her mind
for sign to help her
Great job :-)
peace, Miki
31st Aug 2012 5:39am
I'm glad to hear that and the line was suppose to be "She cries in her mind,for a sign to help her." I fixed it, but it's one you have to think about.
