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Strangle
It feels like silk around my throat
Nice and tightly woven within my skin
Pull the string to make it sting
Tighter and tighter, it makes me bleed
My thoughts are withered and dry
Pull the string and the sound it will bring
Eyes that were full of despair
Are now humbled and hushed
Pull the string to hear me sing
Now strangle me.
Nice and tightly woven within my skin
Pull the string to make it sting
Tighter and tighter, it makes me bleed
My thoughts are withered and dry
Pull the string and the sound it will bring
Eyes that were full of despair
Are now humbled and hushed
Pull the string to hear me sing
Now strangle me.
Published 11th Aug 2012
| Edited 29th Jun 2024
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11th Aug 2012 1:36pm
11th Aug 2012 11:10pm
Yes, now that's what I'm talking about. Raw and elegant submission ... the Dom likes!
21st Aug 2012 6:39am
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20th Mar 2019 9:38am
I love this one, and yes its been a long emotionally charged road here dear. Im thrilled you are jumping in! <3
22nd Aug 2023 10:20pm
I don't why, but I pictured a puppet with strings to make it talk. It's very good.
24th Aug 2023 3:21pm
