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Nothing changes the sky from blue
You have me in the grip of your hand
I cant deny it you are truly grand
Every time you are near
I suddenly appear
Life has only just begun
Yet we have so much fun
Why is it that i flock to you
Nothing will ever change the sky from blue
Just as nothing will change my love for you
Published 10th Aug 2012
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10th Aug 2012 11:57pm
Very sweet little poem.
"Nothing will ever change the sky from blue
Just as nothing will change my love for you"
Original? Im glad to see that you can make up your own rhymes and stay away from overused cliches. Write more. You have skill.
"Nothing will ever change the sky from blue
Just as nothing will change my love for you"
Original? Im glad to see that you can make up your own rhymes and stay away from overused cliches. Write more. You have skill.
11th Aug 2012 00:39am
it sounds like you dont understand that you are in love. or just the type of love you hold. i really love that.
