This is the End

Very sad poem but very expressive - well written

Thank you(:

You are a good writer, but the poem is a little confusing to me because you seem to go from rejection to acceptance in such a short time.  But the poem was a good read.  One suggestion, take it for what it's worth (probably not much): broaden your scope of your poetry (I read your Bio) so as not just to include you and your feelings.  That will give you obviously a broader base to work from.


msrcella1

Thank you for your input(:
Very helpful(:
But in all honesty
Ive tried broadening my scope of poetry
and almost anything else comes out really cheesey
or something that doesnt make any sense
But again Thank you(:
And ill try to do as you suggested(: