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Shoulder
I see him standing
on that same rock
that bluddy rock
what use is it?
it's always there for
someone
someone to just
stand on it
waiting for them
to stand
be waiting a while
furrit
rock
aye
on that same rock
that bluddy rock
what use is it?
it's always there for
someone
someone to just
stand on it
waiting for them
to stand
be waiting a while
furrit
rock
aye
Published 25th Mar 2010
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Anonymous
25th Mar 2010 12:02pm
I really like, its startling in its brevity and the feelings it evokes,finely carved indeed.So much so that it makes my eyes moist
25th Feb 2014 3:03am
You have what i like to call a hidden brilliance. one thousand feelings you try your best to explain.
