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A Rose
Mmmmm…the softness of it
The sweet aroma that tingles the senses
When you lean in to inhale the scent, something tells you to taste it
Stick out your tongue and glide it over the moist dew of the morning
Just like the sun rising to say good morning, the petals began to spread apart
You know that your tongue is commanding, demanding, and directing each movement…
So you go even further…Your tongue now dips through the center of the most curled petals…
The flavor that you now taste shakes you to the core…Mmmmm exotic…..
Intoxicated, enveloped in moisture, scents, and desire
You decide to slide you hand down into your pants for added pleasure
Once you find your joystick, you began to stroke it with persistence
Petals softly caress your lips
Heat from your breath intensifies the aroma
As you come closer to climax, your tongue leaves the center of the rose
Only to be replaced by love shots from your joystick
As your love drips from its petals, you lustfully admire this lovely black rose
It is only a[/font] ro[/b]se…[/b]
The sweet aroma that tingles the senses
When you lean in to inhale the scent, something tells you to taste it
Stick out your tongue and glide it over the moist dew of the morning
Just like the sun rising to say good morning, the petals began to spread apart
You know that your tongue is commanding, demanding, and directing each movement…
So you go even further…Your tongue now dips through the center of the most curled petals…
The flavor that you now taste shakes you to the core…Mmmmm exotic…..
Intoxicated, enveloped in moisture, scents, and desire
You decide to slide you hand down into your pants for added pleasure
Once you find your joystick, you began to stroke it with persistence
Petals softly caress your lips
Heat from your breath intensifies the aroma
As you come closer to climax, your tongue leaves the center of the rose
Only to be replaced by love shots from your joystick
As your love drips from its petals, you lustfully admire this lovely black rose
It is only a[/font] ro[/b]se…[/b]
Published 6th Jul 2012
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6th Jul 2012 4:58pm
6th Jul 2012 5:46pm
10th Jul 2012 4:02pm
".......petals softly caress your lips
Heat from your breath intensifies the aroma
As you come closer to climax, your tongue leaves the center of the rose
Only to be replaced by love shots from your joystick
As your love drips from its petals, you lustfully admire this lovely black rose......"
absolutely beautiful!!! Words that allow the voyeuristic, creative eyes to feel, become part of the moment and you have decribed such an exquisite moment within the beauty of a dark rose. Mmmm mmm mmm.
Heat from your breath intensifies the aroma
As you come closer to climax, your tongue leaves the center of the rose
Only to be replaced by love shots from your joystick
As your love drips from its petals, you lustfully admire this lovely black rose......"
absolutely beautiful!!! Words that allow the voyeuristic, creative eyes to feel, become part of the moment and you have decribed such an exquisite moment within the beauty of a dark rose. Mmmm mmm mmm.
10th Jul 2012 5:31pm
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26th Jul 2012 8:48pm
20th Jul 2012 5:51pm
well well well inspiration comes along with experience I guess, hahaha great write!
26th Jul 2012 8:47pm
