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Suicidal Urges
She's in her darkest hours and mind.
She tries to fight the Suicidal Urges.
She looks around for something to please the hunger.
She runs to the kitchen and grabs the knife. She starts slicing away at the once non-harmed life.
She's addicted to the bloody flesh each time more and more. She's getting dizzier, everything is getting blurrier, she stumbles to the door.
She screams for help, but nothing comes out except for a yelp.
As she's painfully and slowly dying, She's silently screaming and crying. She's biting her lip, the blood starts to drip.
She was once broken but now she's bloody, broken and choking.
She's seconds away from her last breath. She's not ready to embrace her painful death.
Her brown eyes were once filled with life, but they quickly turn into dark black.
She tried to run back, But it's too late. The devil cruely snatches away her life and fate.
She's slowly fading away.
She says goodbye, it's all a lie.
She tries to fight the Suicidal Urges.
She looks around for something to please the hunger.
She runs to the kitchen and grabs the knife. She starts slicing away at the once non-harmed life.
She's addicted to the bloody flesh each time more and more. She's getting dizzier, everything is getting blurrier, she stumbles to the door.
She screams for help, but nothing comes out except for a yelp.
As she's painfully and slowly dying, She's silently screaming and crying. She's biting her lip, the blood starts to drip.
She was once broken but now she's bloody, broken and choking.
She's seconds away from her last breath. She's not ready to embrace her painful death.
Her brown eyes were once filled with life, but they quickly turn into dark black.
She tried to run back, But it's too late. The devil cruely snatches away her life and fate.
She's slowly fading away.
She says goodbye, it's all a lie.
Published 4th Jul 2012
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Anonymous
14th Nov 2012 11:01am
Yes, slowly fading is a sad destiny, suicide is a theme much written of, im not sure if its your real thoughts, hopefully not, nice poem!
22nd Mar 2014 10:15pm
this is very sad and touching yet the constant use of 'she' and 'she' makes the poem redundant.
If the poem was shorter in length that would've been ok, I think, but as it's a large poem it doesn't afford to be very repetitive.
my 2 cents.
If the poem was shorter in length that would've been ok, I think, but as it's a large poem it doesn't afford to be very repetitive.
my 2 cents.
