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Bound by lies
Give me the silk
you used to bind me with
so that i may cover your mouth
so i can stop the Lies that roll
freely off your tounge
where is the whip you beat me with
so that i may slap the hands
that dare to claim me
mind, body, and soul
please
close those "hollow" eyes
so that i may weap with freedom
answer my quiet demands
so that my body wont betray me
to the lust that evokes
the willing victim inside of me
you used to bind me with
so that i may cover your mouth
so i can stop the Lies that roll
freely off your tounge
where is the whip you beat me with
so that i may slap the hands
that dare to claim me
mind, body, and soul
please
close those "hollow" eyes
so that i may weap with freedom
answer my quiet demands
so that my body wont betray me
to the lust that evokes
the willing victim inside of me
Published 26th Jun 2012
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27th Jun 2012 00:16am
27th Jun 2012 11:42am
Some say within the BDSM universe that a top is addicted, that the slave is the master, but this one addresses the betrayal of the dom, who didn't know to hold with loyalty the honest vulnerability of a partner. There's a greater rage in that than the simple anger in being a used victim.
27th Jun 2012 6:56pm
Robthms- thank you
LokiOfLiterati- When i started to write this poem it was meant to portray society by comparing myself as the slave and society as the "man" or now as the "master" in the end it seemed stronger by basing it on BDSM. Though we are strong we still succumb to the higher forces around us weather its sex or pain in the end we know where we stand we know what we crave yet we know that its wrong in some sense and that we are being used or lied to the wool has been pulled over our heads and we have no choice sometimes on if its to stay or come off.. so apart from the anger wich i wanted to strongly show thiers also a weakness a certain vulnerability. when you give another person power over your body its up to them to remain honest or turn cruel its a gamble...btw sorry if i lost you it was easier writing then to explain.
Thank you for the feedback its very much appreciated.
LokiOfLiterati- When i started to write this poem it was meant to portray society by comparing myself as the slave and society as the "man" or now as the "master" in the end it seemed stronger by basing it on BDSM. Though we are strong we still succumb to the higher forces around us weather its sex or pain in the end we know where we stand we know what we crave yet we know that its wrong in some sense and that we are being used or lied to the wool has been pulled over our heads and we have no choice sometimes on if its to stay or come off.. so apart from the anger wich i wanted to strongly show thiers also a weakness a certain vulnerability. when you give another person power over your body its up to them to remain honest or turn cruel its a gamble...btw sorry if i lost you it was easier writing then to explain.
Thank you for the feedback its very much appreciated.
