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In Black And White .....part deux
"Your body's callin' me
Callin' me
Callin' me
You don't have to say nothing......
I know your body wants something.
It's easy for me to see......
......that your body's callin' for me"
Each progressive image intensifies
The longing felt........
.....and my desire rises to a brand new high
Black and White. Beautiful legs and thighs
Perfectly manicured feet......
Sculpted curves. A rain of emotion from inside me on the rise.....
and rising!! ....... I'm outta' my body
Hovering above the ground
Floating on a cloud baby
"Meet me on the moon"..... diggin' our sexy love sounds.
"....pop, pop, pop"
The sound of hot, wet, flesh slapping together
as my body moves incessantly between the juncture of your thick, plush, ample thighs.....
Black and white, eroticism personified..... Fuck Me....
......mmmmmm, the way we're going at each other just like that!
A plume of heat waves rising from the bed, moving the air
two wet bodies fucking......
and your beautiful, black raven hair ....
....spread across scattered pillows
as you try to hold on to something ........
......thrusting deeply inside like a wild stallion running free.
With each stroke your thighs open wider, wider.....
In black and white, "Fuck me........."
..........you say you don't use words such as that?
In black and white, it's the only way I can convey to you where our "pleasure principle" is at..
(Damn, I didn't know that your beautiful round, tight ass was so deliciously phat. I 'm an addict 4 ur love)
Mmmmm, you've made my dick to grow so thick, so long ,hard and phat
Lips swollen, her mouth spread so widely open
I never knew you could receive my pleasure.....
.....just like that
and neither of us feel no pain. Two people locked erotically at the soul....
......so ethereal..... so damned insane!
I am the clouds and you bring the rain.
Your body is a wonderland, a guilty pleasure-a decadent, sinful treat.
Your stomach muscles rippling, straining......the curling of your beautiful feet
.....seeking a release. Trynna' "get it in" baby
Barely able to speak......
Until the rains came.
Oooooos,Aahhhhs, sexual moans
Gutteral utterings.....the sounds alone
turn me on....
"Fuck this pussy! Oh My God! Put it back in me.......Oooooooo!
I'm burning up baby, you got me so damned hot! U make me wanna' cum 4 U soooooo damned bad. Baby.....
"........nothing has ever been this good
Nothing has ever been this right
Nothing so sweet, In my life..."
Whimper's and whispers
wet bed sheets
Have you and I even come close to
releasing the sexual tension built up
between you and me?
In Black and White, such wonders shall never cease........
....."I'm listening baby
I hear you callin' me
Yes, It's easy for me to see
That your body's callin' for me"
Published 26th Jun 2012
| Edited 27th Jun 2012
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26th Jun 2012 5:32pm
You make love to many and fuck a few with your words! Your gift of ink is powerful like that! ;-)
26th Jun 2012 5:39pm
Thank You pretty lady. I'll say no more than that cause I simply don't know what else to say..... :-)
26th Jun 2012 6:00pm
LMBO! I just meant that a great writer moves readers with his/her delivery of words. You have a gift of making a woman feel your poetry.(literally)
26th Jun 2012 8:50pm
I agree with rain1....you really do have a way with words!
Beautifuly, magnificently done!
Beautifuly, magnificently done!
27th Jun 2012 00:52am
I was tempted to suggest that you could highlight "Feel No Pain" as the lyric to a song but then I listened to it and realized it doesn't quite fit the story told here.
Very good use of motifs in this poem.
Very good use of motifs in this poem.
27th Jun 2012 1:00am
27th Jun 2012 11:37am
It's a good beat that seems to break past barriers with every verse. A plateau is reached and then the dirt talk is a little looser. Every verse opens the doorway a little further on the call-and-response rhythm which makes for a good, steady rising ride.
27th Jun 2012 11:59am
Thank you so much for the very astute observations and comments. But in the immortal words of Austin Powers, "Do I make you horny baby?" LMAO!!!!
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