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Aim It Straight to Pieces
Aim it straight
At the big red X
Right over my heart
Hit the mark
Throw hard
Target locked
Do you worst
Make it hurt
Shatter it to
Pieces
Make your move
Pull the trigger
Make it right
Seize the prey
Make a bulleye's shot
Breaking it apart
Show your skills
Shoutin fire
Leave my heart in
Shatters
Published 24th Jun 2012
| Edited 23rd Apr 2013
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25th Jul 2012 8:31am
i like this
its strange not usual in any way
i like the part wher it says
"pull the trigger" and
"make it right" its as if
you did something wrong
that you need to make right
it open this portal to like a diffrent
kind of poetry for me
one where what your saying
is up to anyone reading
to decied what it means
i really like it, thanks for posting
its strange not usual in any way
i like the part wher it says
"pull the trigger" and
"make it right" its as if
you did something wrong
that you need to make right
it open this portal to like a diffrent
kind of poetry for me
one where what your saying
is up to anyone reading
to decied what it means
i really like it, thanks for posting
