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On the rush hour...
On the rush hour
The time for us
Stood still
You are the only
Thing that now
Is real
The rain is dropping
We don't care
Attacked by chill
Please, hold me on
In your warm hands
And feel
The love.
It's like a
Bright attraction
Your eyes
Are filled by
My reflection
We're hypnotised
We feel the
Same affection
So now
We are the only
One emotion...
The time for us
Stood still
You are the only
Thing that now
Is real
The rain is dropping
We don't care
Attacked by chill
Please, hold me on
In your warm hands
And feel
The love.
It's like a
Bright attraction
Your eyes
Are filled by
My reflection
We're hypnotised
We feel the
Same affection
So now
We are the only
One emotion...
Published 15th Jun 2012
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15th Jun 2012 1:15am
I don't usually read upbeat poems because I somewhat anticipate them being corny or cotton candy sweetness; I gave yours a try to do something new, and this short, but smooth lil' diddy made me reconsider. Very nice.
10th Jul 2012 3:15am
