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SWEET      SURRENDER

Your love I remember,  was sweet surrender.
I held you to my body thight, till the stars
gave way to the morning light.

I kissed the back of your neck and whispered
in your ear, there is nothing to fear. I felt you
take your last breath, you called my name
before death.

The Lord took you to soon as I will remember,
our first sweet surrender. I lay and weeping,
having a hard time sleeping. I send you kiss's
to heaven above, you were my first true love.

Tony S Pinedo
Written by mileaftermile
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