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Erode
You erode me
washing over me
Don't you see me standing
It's like everytime you see me standing you can't wait to watch me fall
Because you know with every stand I only seem a bit stronger and bit more taller
A bit more wiser
It's like you smell the education I am attaining
It's like you feel that I am rising while your still mounted
It's like I'm flying while your sinking
You erode me
Eating away at every ounce of my happiness
Festering onto my emptiness
Non sympathetic toward me period
I have no choice but to delete every positive image of you from my mind
You leave me no option
And with that I shall have no remorse
You erode me
sucking me dry of all love I once had
I can never love one the way I loved you
but not to have loved you, would I know how to reciprocate with another....
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washing over me
Don't you see me standing
It's like everytime you see me standing you can't wait to watch me fall
Because you know with every stand I only seem a bit stronger and bit more taller
A bit more wiser
It's like you smell the education I am attaining
It's like you feel that I am rising while your still mounted
It's like I'm flying while your sinking
You erode me
Eating away at every ounce of my happiness
Festering onto my emptiness
Non sympathetic toward me period
I have no choice but to delete every positive image of you from my mind
You leave me no option
And with that I shall have no remorse
You erode me
sucking me dry of all love I once had
I can never love one the way I loved you
but not to have loved you, would I know how to reciprocate with another....
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Published 8th Jun 2012
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Is love a pestillence....a parasite...that gnaws at our existence.. ...At times love is not uplifting..it makes us vulnerable...more weak.. a celebration of our weakness
8th Jun 2012 7:01pm
Wow nice poetry I had felt the emotion in this poem an this is how I'm feelin now but it still rocks
9th Jun 2012 00:20am
Well I am glad I can share my emotions and others can relate...ahhh, makes me feel wonderful I could do that for you...if you like please don't hesitate in subscribing to my poems :)
