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Anonymous
6th Jun 2012 3:54am
lol...very creative, I feel ya
6th Jun 2012 4:09am
6th Jun 2012 4:18am
I love it! less is more. Let the reader fill in the blanks and relate to her or his own writing issues of paused motivation/inspiration/creativity/personal walls/ The picture certainly ties it together.
7th Jun 2012 3:52am
:) I figured people were gonna rip it shreds.. but I thought it poignant. Thanks!
9th Jun 2012 4:38pm
22nd Jun 2012 11:47pm
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runningturtle87
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runningturtle87
10th Oct 2012 8:54pm
I have been asking if we could put more than one image on a poem because just like what you did, the picture painted a thousand words...sometimes we can convey messages more effectively with accompanying images.
