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please just leave me
i see it
in the corner of my eye
it stands there
watching me
telling me
its there
i quiver in fear
reaching out for the stars
but none can be in my grasp
i wait for night to fall
to hold me tight
for its evil grin
to remind me who i am
but that thing
just stands there
it looks at me
just staring
i cant stand it
i cant take it
i want
i want to kill
the blood inside me boils
wanting to escape
burning through my flesh
wanting to come out
one step closer
getting closer
one step
two step
i keep a knife in my hand
i stick it out in front of me
i start stabbing in the corner
i start screaming
start shouting
DIE BUNNY, DIE!!
GO TO HELL!!
i swear im going crazy
but i keep stabbing
just want to kill it
i just want it to leave me alone
to abodon me
like every one else
i dont know how to deal
with it
it doesnt leave my side
it comforts me when im sad
i cant handle it
i just want it to go
be like everyone else bunny!
JUST GO!!
DIE ALREADY
leave me alone
walk away
leave me in your dust
just like the others
tell me your sorry
with a sad mask
when you really arent sad
fake your emotions
fake your sorrow
be like every adult in my life
kids are alone
not hiding how they feel
distguiseting the adults
who have to keep a big grin
or cry when nessisary
wearing a mask
that shows only lies
be like adults bunny
i know how to deal with that
i know how to deal
with someone who doesnt care
that throws the things they dont need
away
who hurt others to get ahead
i know how to deal
with those who hurt
every one
and everthing aroung them
who bully and critize
who speak their thoughts out loud
bunny
i cant deal with those who care
who love
and are caring
theyll only get used
and abused
by others
i cant deal with them bunny
because i am sorrounded
by those who wish me harm
by the evil adults
who just play their parts
i can not wish for someone
who is kind
for someone who cares
its not aloud
for someone like me
thats why i cant stand you bunny
so kind
and fluffy
so i have one wish
even if i am asking to much
i just want one thing
DIE BUNNY, DIE!!
in the corner of my eye
it stands there
watching me
telling me
its there
i quiver in fear
reaching out for the stars
but none can be in my grasp
i wait for night to fall
to hold me tight
for its evil grin
to remind me who i am
but that thing
just stands there
it looks at me
just staring
i cant stand it
i cant take it
i want
i want to kill
the blood inside me boils
wanting to escape
burning through my flesh
wanting to come out
one step closer
getting closer
one step
two step
i keep a knife in my hand
i stick it out in front of me
i start stabbing in the corner
i start screaming
start shouting
DIE BUNNY, DIE!!
GO TO HELL!!
i swear im going crazy
but i keep stabbing
just want to kill it
i just want it to leave me alone
to abodon me
like every one else
i dont know how to deal
with it
it doesnt leave my side
it comforts me when im sad
i cant handle it
i just want it to go
be like everyone else bunny!
JUST GO!!
DIE ALREADY
leave me alone
walk away
leave me in your dust
just like the others
tell me your sorry
with a sad mask
when you really arent sad
fake your emotions
fake your sorrow
be like every adult in my life
kids are alone
not hiding how they feel
distguiseting the adults
who have to keep a big grin
or cry when nessisary
wearing a mask
that shows only lies
be like adults bunny
i know how to deal with that
i know how to deal
with someone who doesnt care
that throws the things they dont need
away
who hurt others to get ahead
i know how to deal
with those who hurt
every one
and everthing aroung them
who bully and critize
who speak their thoughts out loud
bunny
i cant deal with those who care
who love
and are caring
theyll only get used
and abused
by others
i cant deal with them bunny
because i am sorrounded
by those who wish me harm
by the evil adults
who just play their parts
i can not wish for someone
who is kind
for someone who cares
its not aloud
for someone like me
thats why i cant stand you bunny
so kind
and fluffy
so i have one wish
even if i am asking to much
i just want one thing
DIE BUNNY, DIE!!
Published 1st Jun 2012
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6th Jun 2012 00:26am
Out of curiosity, in the poem was it a real bunny you were trying to kill? 0.0
You know, I had a bunny once. My mom gave it away one day while I was at school and didn't tell me.
Anyway, I was reading along thinking "she said this was funny, how is this funny?" Then i got to "DIE BUNNY GO TO HELL!" And I really did laugh. Totally unexpected. I liked the tantalizing grimness at the beginning of the poem, it gave me chills. The part with the bunny was a good touch. It gave a lighthearted tint to the dark poem, but the whole thing managed to keep up it's haunting throughout the rest of the poem. I liked how you kind of shared your thoughts with the bunny. Good poem, I actually like it a lot.
You know, I had a bunny once. My mom gave it away one day while I was at school and didn't tell me.
Anyway, I was reading along thinking "she said this was funny, how is this funny?" Then i got to "DIE BUNNY GO TO HELL!" And I really did laugh. Totally unexpected. I liked the tantalizing grimness at the beginning of the poem, it gave me chills. The part with the bunny was a good touch. It gave a lighthearted tint to the dark poem, but the whole thing managed to keep up it's haunting throughout the rest of the poem. I liked how you kind of shared your thoughts with the bunny. Good poem, I actually like it a lot.
6th Jun 2012 00:31am
actually? well thanks, i think
no its a stuffed animal
but i dont have a stuffed bunny
i just had a picture of a stuffed bunny
i have a stuffed panda
but i would never kill that
no its a stuffed animal
but i dont have a stuffed bunny
i just had a picture of a stuffed bunny
i have a stuffed panda
but i would never kill that
25th Jul 2012 8:25am
