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~second homecoming [collab with Vision_of_ insanity (Keith)]
Clear revealing night
Where light is broken twice
To welcome now the stranger
that has made him risen
He opened another door
Out of which he gazed in visions
Strangulated by his own premonition
Expectations and inner competitions
Upon the barriers feasting
with twilight eating eyes
Onward resisting
Demons be driven
Being human is an oath
So he stared into their eyes
A multidimensional plane took him
for all eternity
For these eyes were never shut
Upon humanity feasting
with twilight eating eyes
He can't resist, for his eyes reveal
a world of utopia and beauty
There he meets this beautiful woman
who guides him in.....
eyes eyes these eyes of the iiii
he amazes at the beholding vision
of his eyes.. as she, the One
with fiery sunning eyes with
an embed diamond- the
third eye .. that opens
as a magical portal to him..
of a mirroring One truth..
strange, now
from this beyondness..
.. he lucidly envisions
the gigantically afloat
chaotic bubble .. whence
once himself gotten
existentially trapped.. this
earthen sphere .. now feels
to him .. differently.. anew..
.. as a beloved miniature .. an
azure dotted droplet lashing
as synchronised cosmic lasers
of One collective consciousness
amidst a deafening silence..
.. beautifully swims
in a deepening mystical
spacetime .. humming
om hum om hum..
..a lifetime of his once cellular
darkness.. demystifies to him..
in a quick & simple breakdown ..
to his breathing deep, an
unshackling honeybee mind..
in his ethereal nectarine combs
in fruition.. gathering meaning
of today from yesterdays .. of
a tomorrow from todays..
the rigored flesh hangs away
when wisdom is gripping in
as greyey hairs, literally
the silver linings..
love of life had come in late
when life itself has been lost
… that life lost without living
rises now as spirited form,
merely a clarifying flame
in just a pure quintessence
that..
Published 2nd Apr 2025
| Edited 6th Apr 2025
Author's Note
aw Gratitudes much dear Keith aka Vision_of _insanity for this deeply digging collaboration of soulful poetics .. you truly pushed me to unexplored realms .. in a different tone in here .. hopefully seamlessly done with your verses n flow .. Also am truly inspired by you in positive creativity of adding this Audio Visual Spoken Poem for our Collab dear Keith!! Means so much to me :)XO
also, hopeful n wishing, to continue this collab from where left … or in another setting.. with the talented versatile poetic you dear Keith :) XO
Also, this write is partially inspired by the 2018 Tamil film “96” .. its soul-searching number -The Life of Ram - enacted by fav actor #VijaySethupathi- “linked in here
https://youtu.be/6LD30ChPsSs?feature=shared
Image: web. from the same film “96”
♥️✍️🙏🫂
also, hopeful n wishing, to continue this collab from where left … or in another setting.. with the talented versatile poetic you dear Keith :) XO
Also, this write is partially inspired by the 2018 Tamil film “96” .. its soul-searching number -The Life of Ram - enacted by fav actor #VijaySethupathi- “linked in here
https://youtu.be/6LD30ChPsSs?feature=shared
Image: web. from the same film “96”
♥️✍️🙏🫂
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2nd Apr 2025 9:29pm
AN extraordinary collaboration Uma. We did a wonderful job here. The flow and the expression you created with each word and phrase is marvelous. The ideas came smoothly and the poem has a tightness that is really sharp. Great job Uma for rounding this poem out.
2nd Apr 2025 9:56pm
Yes you are known for that sharpness n piercing write .. which i dont get that much .. i try to learn from you n had tried here somewhat i hope:) glad you felt this tight n smooth , yes i too feel this cane out such as a song of soul.. dedicated to all 99.99% you .. n a bit to 0.01% to my fav actor n human in the inspirational song #vijaysethupathi:) XO
3rd Apr 2025 2:35am
Beautifully penned, Uma & Keith. This was a great collaboration and a wonderful read you two. Appreciate you both.
Damian
Damian
3rd Apr 2025 7:47pm
Thanks much dear Damian for your presencev& read n words of warmth .. to say of this collab, its truly an elevational plane & a smooth seamlessness for me .. to work with my most adored & much respected versatile poet friend n lovable ever Keith:)
6th Apr 2025 6:39pm
Outstanding audio and narration Uma. Your voice & the background music is perfect with this collaboration. Well done. xo
You truly gave the needed positive creative pressure i needed much dear Keith.. i akways believe i perform unimaginably fine under creative chaos n positive pressure like this .. you got me right & hope i gave some justice to your inimitably versatile n prolific poetic you are !!! ♥️🫂
6th Apr 2025 6:53pm
