deepundergroundpoetry.com

Image for the poem VIOLET

VIOLET'S TALE

 
A lady down in Toronto
Is fighting just to stay alive
Rhythmic beeps and blood-stained sheets
Our lady weeps, she's tired and frail
To set the scene we must rewind
The hands of time for Violet's tale

Violet was a silent girl
Grew up with violent starts
Her mother was a drinker
And her father was a bastard

Every night he'd tuck her tight
But never left the room
I'll spare you of the things he did
I'm sure her mother knew

Violet was a silent girl
She moved out at sixteen
A semi-detached council flat
Paid for by a welfare-scheme
Packing shelves at Tesco's
Stacking jars like pickled bricks
She met a boy named Stevie
And he was a little prick

Violet was a silent girl
And Violet, she fell fast
See, Stevie was a wrongin'
But he sure knew how to charm her
Every night he'd tuck her tight
But never left the room
History repeats itself
He'd paint her black and blue and, ah

She never stood a chance
The Devil comes to dance

Violet, why you always so quiet?
On her bedroom door and he's irate
He's been drinking and smoking, he's up late
And he stands by her bedside, she shakes
But her eyes stay shut
You fucking slut, I know you're up
And he pinches her eyelids and folds them up
Violet, why you lying to me, Violet?
She stays silent, things turn violent
That's the sound of his fists when they fall like a crashing pilot

Hit like hailstones
One to the collarbone, full force, full-blown
Blood splat, bone crack, knick-knack-paddy-whack
One to the jaw and a tooth spat, detached
Fist connects and disconnects the bone
A quick deflect to misdirect the blow
But nonetheless, his punches met her throat
Such a mess, he's left her bruised and broke

Violet, why you always so quiet, Violet?
Why you such a little liar, Violet?
Do you think I want to do this, Violet?
In character, she stays silent
Well say something, Violet, silence
Fucking say something, Violet, silence
Wait, say something, Violet
Not one word, she stays quiet

A lady rushed to Paddington
Is fighting just to stay alive
The doctor in a state of shock
Saw something here so very wrong
See Violet, she was pregnant
Poor Violet, she was nine months gone

Turning to the doctor
Violet broke her silence and she cried
"If I'm to die right here tonight
Please let my baby stay alive"
The doctor soon regained composure
Called the surgeon to come in
As Violet's world turned to black
The curtains closed
The lights went dim

A lady down in Paddington
Just lost the fight to stay alive
A tragedy or a miracle
It happened on these very streets
Two twins are lying side by side
A girl named Jenny
And a boy named Screech
Written by MYSTERIOUS_GIRL (Lizzy_3164)
Published
Author's Note
"Violet's Tale" conveys a powerful message about the devastating effects of domestic abuse, particularly highlighting the silent suffering of victims who may not speak out about their experiences, represented by the delicate and quiet nature of a violet flower, while the "tale" itself depicts a story of pain and violence inflicted upon a woman named Violet, who is unable to effectively defend herself against her abuser. 

The poem emphasizes the idea of a victim remaining silent despite the abuse, symbolized by the quiet nature of a violet. 
The poem often suggest that the abuser may have initially appeared charming, but gradually became controlling and abusive, highlighting the insidious nature of domestic violence. 
The peom aims to evoke empathy and understanding for victims of abuse
All writing remains the property of the author. Don't use it for any purpose without their permission.
likes 3 reading list entries 0
comments 6 reads 113
Commenting Preference: 
The author encourages honest critique.

Latest Forum Discussions
COMPETITIONS
Today 3:18pm by crimsin
SPEAKEASY
Today 2:30pm by Ahavati
SPEAKEASY
Today 2:26pm by Ahavati
SPEAKEASY
Today 2:21pm by ajay
POETRY
Today 1:41pm by Grace
COMPETITIONS
Today 7:00am by NANCY_RDZ_STORIES