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No One Other Then You
There's no one other then you.
That I'd rather have next to me boo.
I know that you're exotic.
I'm glad that I caught it.
Whatever it is that you do.
Just me and you.
You've got me intertwined like a damn fool.
Love tales and voodoo spells.
I see now that I'm so screwed.
Under this moon, giving into you.
Topping your body like ice cream.
Is this too soon?
That I'd rather have next to me boo.
I know that you're exotic.
I'm glad that I caught it.
Whatever it is that you do.
Just me and you.
You've got me intertwined like a damn fool.
Love tales and voodoo spells.
I see now that I'm so screwed.
Under this moon, giving into you.
Topping your body like ice cream.
Is this too soon?
Published 28th Jan 2025
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28th Jan 2025 7:55am
What a sensual and romantic poem!
This poem is a beautiful expression of desire, attraction, and intimacy. The speaker's tone is romantic and seductive, as they express their desire for the person they love.
This poem is a beautiful expression of desire, attraction, and intimacy. The speaker's tone is romantic and seductive, as they express their desire for the person they love.
28th Jan 2025 1:55pm
“Topping your body like ice cream”
What a delish line.
So vivid and descriptive. I immediately thought of cream melting with all that heat.
Delish poem in its entirety.
What a delish line.
So vivid and descriptive. I immediately thought of cream melting with all that heat.
Delish poem in its entirety.
