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A Throbbing Scent - with adagio
Pale lips of blue perishable breath
Silence without cliches, listening,
Stuck upon a memory that you are
Blossoming in death’s trite without
Critique in my slumber as I sleep
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Stirred is the mind by a throbbing scent
Soul refilled straying off an end
A warm love unearthed now blooming
So soft the sound of a seed life sipping
Silence just retreated while smiling..
Published 19th Jan 2025
Author's Note
Thank you so much adagio for a so wonderful collaboration!
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19th Jan 2025 11:37pm
20th Jan 2025 11:16am
Thank you so much dear poetess! Such a pleasure! Deeply humbled.. Stay always blessed and happy.
20th Jan 2025 8:11am
Hello,
This is such a well written co write. It is like the work of a seamstress, in my humble opinion the two stanzas complete each other , blessings and greetings,
Rianne
This is such a well written co write. It is like the work of a seamstress, in my humble opinion the two stanzas complete each other , blessings and greetings,
Rianne
20th Jan 2025 11:18am
How much I feel elated and rewarded by your genuine and praising words! Thank you so much for the honour of your visit and delight of your feedback! God bless you.
20th Jan 2025 2:03pm
20th Jan 2025 2:06pm
Deeply humbled.. it is always an honour and tremendous pleasure.. Thank you so much 🙏🏻
