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A Slow Demise

Like old photographs,
memories fade over time
Part of me has died

Written by Vision_of_insanity

Published 16th Jan 2025

#aging #memories #senryu

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Re. A Slow Demise

Anonymous

16th Jan 2025 11:37am

replace the old with new

make them good

16th Jan 2025 11:39am

Thanks

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Re. A Slow Demise

16th Jan 2025 11:49am

As simple as that. Hugs to you, my friend.

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16th Jan 2025 11:50am

Thanks PAR for the comments and RL listing. Always appreciate you!!

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Re. A Slow Demise

16th Jan 2025 8:22pm

fine poetic minimalism Keith!

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16th Jan 2025 11:50pm

Thanks Uma. Appreciated

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Re. A Slow Demise

16th Jan 2025 9:32pm

Brilliantly penned, Keith. Into the list it belongs. Appreciate you.

Damian

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16th Jan 2025 11:51pm

Thanks Damian for the RL..

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