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it was summer
it was
summer
that one night all
those years ago
standing across from
you in the kitchen
your eyes splashed
with angry tears
the dreadful numbing
silence eating thoughts
I didn't know
what to say
standing there
looking down
at the floor
...so I cried,
too
Published 15th Jan 2025
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16th Jan 2025 8:26pm
it’s the dumbfounding silence if sadness n tears.. that’s captured in that immovable moment.. & yes but it’s beautiful melancholy that’s contagious.. this one lingers & relates much bk .. well done xx
16th Jan 2025 9:04pm
I think many of us have experienced that numbing silence in our lives.
Thank you, uma. Very much appreciated.
hugs,
buddhakitty.
Thank you, uma. Very much appreciated.
hugs,
buddhakitty.
