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Seeking the Noir
The rhythm of dying embers and the smile
in your eyes, fading
Remembering the altar place the day we wed
and the messages of hope, the embers we
pledged
Now the requiem, heaped the holy, where
dark turns to a shade of ember's inferno,
seeking the noir
in your eyes, fading
Remembering the altar place the day we wed
and the messages of hope, the embers we
pledged
Now the requiem, heaped the holy, where
dark turns to a shade of ember's inferno,
seeking the noir
Published 6th Dec 2024
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7th Dec 2024 4:59pm
there is a lingering sense of melancholy. i really like the way you wrote this.
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