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Eat prey, fuck
Eat prey, fuck...
It is what testosterone wants him to do.
Eat prey, fuck...
It is what his lower brain wants him to do.
It is what testosterone wants him to do.
Eat prey, fuck...
It is what his lower brain wants him to do.
Author's Note
I have a strong higher brain that can understand and be better at controlling these things. Most men do not.
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Re. Eat prey, fuck
Anonymous
14th Nov 2024 11:43am
Prey…
Not pray. Interesting.
Not pray. Interesting.
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Re: Re. Eat prey, fuck
14th Nov 2024 9:35pm
A friend of mine gave me eat pray love to borrow. I feel obliged to read it, and this idea occurred to me while doing so. The book is good.
Re: Re. Eat prey, fuck
Anonymous
15th Nov 2024 1:26pm
Yes. It is. But it’s
Eat, PRAY, love.
Not prey….
Get what I’m saying?
Eat, PRAY, love.
Not prey….
Get what I’m saying?
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Re: Re. Eat prey, fuck
15th Nov 2024 3:19pm
I don't think so. I spelled it how I meant and she spelled it how she meant, because we mean different words. Anything more and you need to explain for me.
Re. Eat prey, fuck
Anonymous
15th Nov 2024 9:22pm
I guess I do get the meaning of your poem as you intended. Still interesting to me though.
Using “prey” as in the object of your desire is your prey or that you would prey on the object of your desire.
Never took you (including your lower half) to be that sort of man, that’s all. Thank you for clearing that up for me.
Using “prey” as in the object of your desire is your prey or that you would prey on the object of your desire.
Never took you (including your lower half) to be that sort of man, that’s all. Thank you for clearing that up for me.
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Re: Re. Eat prey, fuck
16th Nov 2024 11:14am
It is the testosterone in men. It tells people to fight or fuck, . The poem is an attempt to help explain why so many men still act like cave people and we cannot as a species get beyond war and other really incredibly stupid shit. You can call it unfortunate, but it is natural and got us evolved enough to get here, so there is survival value in testosterone. The problem is that many people don't know shit even about themselves and they cannot control whether or not they decide to fight or fuck someone. I have developed my upper brain and have such control. I still feel like fighting simeti, but I don't. I absolutely feel like fucking a lot, but I can control myself around women without assaulting anyone.
Maybe that was a lot to ask of my readers with such a short poem, but I don't mind leaving some things open to see how hard a reader will try.
Maybe that was a lot to ask of my readers with such a short poem, but I don't mind leaving some things open to see how hard a reader will try.
Re. Eat prey, fuck
18th Nov 2024 12:18pm
What an awesome twist on that book, made me smile.
To me it can be read in two ways: "eat prey" and eat, prey.
Since I don't pray I'm going for prey ;-)
To me it can be read in two ways: "eat prey" and eat, prey.
Since I don't pray I'm going for prey ;-)
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Re: Re. Eat prey, fuck
18th Nov 2024 6:49pm
This is a commentary on testosterone and what it drives people to do. It encourages us to fight or fuck. I am also reading the book. Put it all together and we arrive at this imperfect poem. Thank you for reading and commenting!!