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My life
Haunted by something I can't see,
My life isn't the way I want it to be,
My wrists are mutilated and blood stained,
The other part of me exist on another plane,
I feel in my heart something's not right,
I don't know how to change my life,
The cold pouring rain,
Is washing away my pain,
The reflection that the mirror displays,
Taints my mind in so many ways,
My life isn't what I expected,
There's no happiness I'm deeply affected,
There's so much pain in my heart,
I just wanna be left here alone in the dark.
My life isn't the way I want it to be,
My wrists are mutilated and blood stained,
The other part of me exist on another plane,
I feel in my heart something's not right,
I don't know how to change my life,
The cold pouring rain,
Is washing away my pain,
The reflection that the mirror displays,
Taints my mind in so many ways,
My life isn't what I expected,
There's no happiness I'm deeply affected,
There's so much pain in my heart,
I just wanna be left here alone in the dark.
Published 27th Oct 2024
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27th Oct 2024 10:48pm
Hi again, so you share the name Ash with the badass Superhero Ash from the greatest damn horror movie ever filmed The Evil Dead (autocorrect tried to turn dead to deaf when I typed The Evil Dead 😂 now there's a movie we should do 🤯). I'm wasting your time I apologize, I liked your poem and wanted to ask you a couple of questions about it. Would that be cool?
27th Oct 2024 11:38pm
27th Oct 2024 10:49pm
This is a comment page 🤯😂, I'm a super Dipshit I apologize yet again.
27th Oct 2024 11:49pm
That's absolutely what I wanted to ask you about was when you did this one. I'm a musician and song writer and go through these moments of writer's block and it's just awful. What's really bad is the crazy things I've done over the years to snap it 😂. Skydiving yeah that's what I need to do to break the curse 😂. I'm sure I just wanted to skydive right? Do you run into writers block? The second question I had, was in the poem you indicated you couldn't see this thing that meant to harm you, did it ever come into focus?
