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Blue Jean
Fly, studs
Knee rips
Loose hands
Get to grips
Denim love
Wiggle walks
Derriere
Baby talks
Looking fine
So sublime
Blue Jean
Please be mine
Knee rips
Loose hands
Get to grips
Denim love
Wiggle walks
Derriere
Baby talks
Looking fine
So sublime
Blue Jean
Please be mine
Published 13th Oct 2024
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- Edited 6th Nov 2024 8:45pm
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13th Oct 2024 3:48pm
13th Oct 2024 10:07pm
YES! for the good old days and opening the front door in a pair of Jeans... and then daring...
13th Oct 2024 10:37pm
14th Oct 2024 2:44am
Great write, Pete. Is there any, Bowie influence to this one? Since songs sometimes influence you. Either way, I dig it. Appreciate you.
DL
DL
14th Oct 2024 10:45am
No not on this one haha Damian apart from the title, just an ode to a pair of jeans 🙃❤️
14th Oct 2024 2:06pm
I love this style of writing; veery vivid and right to the point. Lovely if you ask me!
14th Oct 2024 6:43pm
