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Love on the point of a needle

It’s like love on the tip of a needle

I look at you you are gone you drift away

Firming up your arm look for a vein I can connect to

I connect to you you drift away from me

It’s like looking for love on a point of a needle

We dream and string out long it’s ephemeral

How come you can’t treat me like I’m love in a needle

We connect and it’s like I’m in a carnival

But after a few minutes I can’t speak

Looking for love on the point of a needle
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