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Evensong at Big Bear Lake

Beneath a sky that bleeds vermilion hues,
A canvas spread with strokes of crimson blues,
The sun descends behind the mountain’s crest,
A symbol of the turmoil laid to rest.

The waters mirror this fiery retreat,
Holding the day’s last gold in bittersweet,
While shadows of our pasts, like sentinels stand,
Guarding the peace newfound on tranquil land.

From depths, the gentle lapping sounds confess
To struggles faced and quiet victories bless,
Echoing whispers that the breeze imparts,
Carrying tales of reborn, mended hearts.

The clouds, adorned in twilight’s glowing wear,
Dance slowly with the wind, shedding despair,
Each form a ghostly ship on seas of fade,
Drifting away from old, tormented shades.

The horizon, a blurred line of dark and light,
Speaks of the end of day, yet hints at night’s
Bright stars that await with gentle, promising ring,
A vespers bell of hope does softly sing.

In fading light, the world seems to pause and slow,
As shadows lengthen and the soft winds blow,
Big Bear whispers, its breath cool and light,
A sonnet of peace, in the calm of twilight.

As dusk ensnares the lake in its embrace,
Stars awaken to claim the sun’s lost place.
In this serene communion night does partake,
Dreams of a new dawn swell upon Big Bear Lake.
Written by Heisenberg68
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Author's Note
When I took the sunset photo accompanying this poem, I was working with an alcoholic on his road to recovery ( a road similar to mine).

I wanted to create a poem that refers to the melancholy and despair of alcoholism and addiction; yet balanced with the new found confidence that comes with working a strong program of recovery.

The intended metaphor should be the sun is setting on addiction and the night will be a bridge to a new day with a better way of living. The poem should be saying to have confidence even though that day is not here yet.
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