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the last stop
in the greed
of becoming young,
my childhood
got captured
in this mirror,
when the evening
of my life arrived,
the deficiency
of vitamins increased,
when there was
no one
to smell my fragrance
and
no one
to listen to my loneliness,
then this childhood
stood by me
it came into my silent life,
by becoming the shape of words...
of becoming young,
my childhood
got captured
in this mirror,
when the evening
of my life arrived,
the deficiency
of vitamins increased,
when there was
no one
to smell my fragrance
and
no one
to listen to my loneliness,
then this childhood
stood by me
it came into my silent life,
by becoming the shape of words...
Published 16th Sep 2024
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16th Sep 2024 6:33pm
Well said dimpy. We all would love to be young again and not be alone. I get these little worry pangs that I won't have anyone with me when I'm in the hospital from old age.
As for you, You've got a long time to go. :)
As for you, You've got a long time to go. :)
16th Sep 2024 6:41pm
hello Tim
i don't know whether life will take me to the last stop or not....but I am sure that life is beautiful n wanna reach till the end...
i don't know whether life will take me to the last stop or not....but I am sure that life is beautiful n wanna reach till the end...
16th Sep 2024 6:43pm
17th Sep 2024 2:27am
Very good, Dimpy. This is impressive! I really like the newfound sense of introspection that you've been doing. Your writing has taken on a level of maturity that suits you so well.
Bravo.
Bravo.
17th Sep 2024 3:57am
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17th Sep 2024 9:50am
Excellent word play and imagery! May the children in all of us be our guides!!
17th Sep 2024 3:45pm
18th Sep 2024 3:20am
"Days go By" If only we could travel back in time. I think too much of this and then I come and read this. A great find and read.
18th Sep 2024 3:30am
21st Sep 2024 4:27am
We are young at heart. We are as young as we feel. Keep on writing my strong beautiful smart sexy lady.
21st Sep 2024 5:09pm
