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excentric

 
looking into your soul I falter
there is a strangeness there
I feel uncomfortable for looking
but look I must
something deep within keeps calling to me
 
interesting revelation you are shy actually
and very private
I commend you for opening up to me
usually people pull back  
when they realize their soul is revealing itself
 
in your somber moods I leave you alone
I know it is vital for you to have space
I go as far away as I can
still it might feel like I'm invading
 
once I connect to a person
our emotions get quite tangled
reading your heart I know you prefer to be alone
and I'm grateful you let me in at all
 
you've tested my responses
I am no person to make any declaration
your tastes are what you like
that being said you appeal to a fair few
 
I am a odd girl out of the light
and i prefer the shadows to being the center of attention
it never ends well when I'm being watched
 
I invariably do something foolish
after some men rate me as beautiful
you are lovely to me that you have set aside your judgment
and embraced the full excentric me
 
 
Written by smackdownraven
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