Mutilation.

Wow!

Such deep degraded depravity in a woman so young. For many, abuse is a living nightmare they'd understandably do without, yet among the roses, there are those who secretly crave the heavy handed treatment of one lost in the darkest regions of demonic possession.

That which some girfear is that which some girls crave.

Human psychology will never be understood, yet praised for its often uncomfortable inspiration.  

Xxx

I wrote this poem to portray how abuse can become normality in relationships, and how the victim starts to crave the moments where the abuser feels guilt, and trys to apologize to the victim and make it up to them somehow. I also tried to portray the feeling or loving someone so much, you would let them do anything, and how the person you love can abuse that power you’ve given them and hurt you with it.

You captured it perfectly.

It's heartbreaking to think that a girl so young has already experienced this kind of treatment. I sincerely hope its not the case and you simply have a versatile imagination.  

Xxx

I have experienced a lot of things tbh but it helps me write meaningful pieces so it is good in some ways

gripping.

Thank you, do you have any feedback on how I could improve my writing?

I'll check them out and let you know if I have any. This piece is as raw as they come.