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Sunny cafe
Come and talk to me
I would like it
As I stand in this sunny cafe
Looking out of the glass
Peeking at passerbys
Where did you travel last time
Do you still think of your crush
Why
Come and talk to me
I would like it
As I stand in this sunny cafe
Looking out of the glass
Peeking at passerbys
Give me some warmth.
I would like it
As I stand in this sunny cafe
Looking out of the glass
Peeking at passerbys
Where did you travel last time
Do you still think of your crush
Why
Come and talk to me
I would like it
As I stand in this sunny cafe
Looking out of the glass
Peeking at passerbys
Give me some warmth.
Published 17th May 2024
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18th May 2024 00:10am
I’ve come back to this a few times.
I really like how you repeat the first stanza and the last line is definitely the icing on the cake.
Part of me wants you to elaborate but honestly, I dig how I’m left wondering…
I really like how you repeat the first stanza and the last line is definitely the icing on the cake.
Part of me wants you to elaborate but honestly, I dig how I’m left wondering…
18th May 2024 00:15am
Thank you dear, your words are a support and warmth. They make me feel good, make this writing experience more enjoyable, and make me want to write more. Thank you a lot.
18th May 2024 00:15am
18th May 2024 00:11am
sounds like a nice place to meet, looking out the glass and peeking at passerbys
18th May 2024 00:19am
Yes I love places with glass and peeking at people that walk. It was my favorite cafe and it was particularly sunny that day. A very fine day.
