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Waves
I was not there.
They shared my news, then asked for more;
I was not there!
Who would have thought that I might care?
That pain of losing him at four
when Ocean seized love from my shore;
I was not there.
They shared my news, then asked for more;
I was not there!
Who would have thought that I might care?
That pain of losing him at four
when Ocean seized love from my shore;
I was not there.
Published 1st May 2024
Author's Note
for the rondolet comp.
All writing remains the property of the author. Don't use it for any purpose without their permission.
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1st May 2024 3:14am
Sorry you were not there.. kidding… this is a great rondolet… I don’t even begin to write anything as complex as this… good luck
1st May 2024 3:09pm
1st May 2024 5:01am
Dear U,
There was a great deal of poignancy in this poem, and I do enjoy a rondolet.
Brief yet very engaging, wonderfully written and I wish you all the best in this comp. H🌷
There was a great deal of poignancy in this poem, and I do enjoy a rondolet.
Brief yet very engaging, wonderfully written and I wish you all the best in this comp. H🌷
1st May 2024 3:10pm
4th May 2024 6:31pm
GD ursa, this was hard to read. I felt so sad and teary-eyed and I appreciate you writing this.
LJ
LJ
4th May 2024 10:28pm
thank you Lj, you hosted a great competition, and I look forward to your next. I appreciate you.
warmly,
ursa 💜
warmly,
ursa 💜
17th Jul 2024 10:22am
17th Jul 2024 3:58pm
