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Stubborn Soldier
So tell me,
How does it feel to be ripped of your pride?
The power that defined your stride,
Now, that you've lost your government tag?
The only source of delighted brag?
There wasn't much from the beginning,
Was there?
Arrogance, such depth in personality,
Was there?
I now say farewell,
as you break, oh well.
With all those righteous lies you've tormented me with,
To karma, I left, to handle you with.
Now, you sit in your ragged chair,
no longer a throne, to treat others without a care.
To get a kick,
Nothing left but to fix
Yourself.
Manipulating,
Mocking,
Deteriorating,
How you forsaken others.
Now
Mocking, deteriorating, forsaking yourself.
Sipping on beers, in pity, by yourself.
I hope you learn the way you treated
Others so low, and how conceited
You were, and admit.
For others to speak, you permit.
The damage you cost, and repent.
Accept your responsibility as a parent.
I'll be waiting for you.
Published 27th Apr 2024
| Edited 30th Apr 2024
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28th Apr 2024 3:28am
Some people are poorly equipped to be parents. Plain and simple. Life gives no requirements for living except morals, responsibilities and maybe boundaries, but of course not everyone wants to follow those. They become self-centered with a lack of care for others including themselves. It's a shame but it happens all over.
28th Apr 2024 3:37am
You speak truth. It sucks... but I guess what doesn't kill you, makes you stronger!!
I hope anyone who goes through such for strength...because I know how difficult it was.
For the soldiers too though, to improve.
I appreciate your visit!
♡
I hope anyone who goes through such for strength...because I know how difficult it was.
For the soldiers too though, to improve.
I appreciate your visit!
♡
2nd May 2024 4:10pm
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7th Jun 2024 4:30am
This is powerful tonic and a reminder to would be parents everywhere that there are responsibilities that accompany having children. Most people can have children but being a parent isn't a gift everyone has. This is truly strong and an emotional message to the partner in life that if a relationship with children is to work it takes two people who must sacrifice time and energy to raise them.
John
John
