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Frozen in Motion
Leaden gray sky weeps
Pitter patter of the rain
A chill wind bites
Lost senses, wandering gaze
People living on
Yet, here, i froze
Imprisoned within
Stuck in a loop
That strangles my breath
Its weight, oh so heavy
Making me break instead
Whispers that hold me down
Ghosts that haunt me down
Lost in my own path
Hoping for a light to pierce through
Pitter patter of the rain
A chill wind bites
Lost senses, wandering gaze
People living on
Yet, here, i froze
Imprisoned within
Stuck in a loop
That strangles my breath
Its weight, oh so heavy
Making me break instead
Whispers that hold me down
Ghosts that haunt me down
Lost in my own path
Hoping for a light to pierce through
Published 18th Apr 2024
| Edited 13th Sep 2024
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19th Apr 2024 6:26am
Dear L,
I really appreciated your poem. For me, it so aptly captures the feelings of loneliness, despair and fear. Great writing. H🌷
I really appreciated your poem. For me, it so aptly captures the feelings of loneliness, despair and fear. Great writing. H🌷
22nd Sep 2024 1:19pm
If the loneliness overtakes you, try & express it through writing. Beautifully said, and a real emptiness can be felt here.
22nd Sep 2024 10:21pm
