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The Crawl
it is eerie in here
creepy and alone
i'm cold as bone
dark surrounds
me swallows me
whole, eats me
from the inside
i'm on all fours
on your floor it's
too broke to fix
you're no longer
around left me to
bleed left me to
die at your feet
you watched me
fading and falling
crumble and crawl
into a deep dark hole
creepy and alone
i'm cold as bone
dark surrounds
me swallows me
whole, eats me
from the inside
i'm on all fours
on your floor it's
too broke to fix
you're no longer
around left me to
bleed left me to
die at your feet
you watched me
fading and falling
crumble and crawl
into a deep dark hole
Published 14th Apr 2024
Author's Note
About old wounds and scars.
...Placebo inspired series...
https://youtu.be/JJwZOMWwDCI
...Placebo inspired series...
https://youtu.be/JJwZOMWwDCI
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14th Apr 2024 4:43pm
Wow.. that's a deep and sad poem. I hope that you've shed yourself from it! 😍
15th Apr 2024 9:53am
Yes, I've shred myself from it. This was a series about old wounds, inspired by songs from Placebo. Their sound is dark and alienated so it was screaming for something dark.
Thanks for your visit and comment, I appreciate you :-)
Thanks for your visit and comment, I appreciate you :-)
14th Apr 2024 6:08pm
I’m grateful to be reading this series. I admire the work you’re doing.
Childhood trauma often makes it impossible to express the emotions we felt then, even as adults, but you’ve done it perfectly.
Holding you in thought, D.
Childhood trauma often makes it impossible to express the emotions we felt then, even as adults, but you’ve done it perfectly.
Holding you in thought, D.
15th Apr 2024 9:54am
That's such an amazing to say, that you are grateful to be reading this series. And yes, childhood trauma has quite an impact on who we are as adults.
Thanks heaps for your comment and holding me 💕
Thanks heaps for your comment and holding me 💕
14th Apr 2024 9:13pm
Dear D,
You capture these feelings of isolation, fear and loneliness in such amazing ways. This reads almost like Morse code to me which makes it all the more intense. Great writing. H🌷
You capture these feelings of isolation, fear and loneliness in such amazing ways. This reads almost like Morse code to me which makes it all the more intense. Great writing. H🌷
15th Apr 2024 9:55am
Dear H,
So happy to hear you think I captured the feelings of isolation and loneliness in amazing ways. I'm very honored by your words and thoughts - thanks heaps for that 💕
So happy to hear you think I captured the feelings of isolation and loneliness in amazing ways. I'm very honored by your words and thoughts - thanks heaps for that 💕
15th Apr 2024 00:50am
They wreak havoc on us & leave us to make sense of the catastrophic damage. They're gone. Which is a gift...without them continuing to slash gashes into our psyche, we can heal. Slowly & agonizingly. Little sister, you touch raw nerves & remind us we're not alone
15th Apr 2024 9:56am
They do. The healing is mostly behind me, though it sometimes comes back in waves. So grateful my poems are reminders others are not alone. I think that's the beauty of poetry.
Thanks heaps for your words and thoughts, big sister 💕
Thanks heaps for your words and thoughts, big sister 💕
15th Apr 2024 9:58am
H8 there, I really like this write, particularly the brevity if each stanza. Thank you for sharing:)
15th Apr 2024 12:28pm
You're so very welcome, glad you like this write.
Thanks heaps for the visit & comment, I appreciate it.
Thanks heaps for the visit & comment, I appreciate it.
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