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Untitled 3 minute write#2
```~~~…~~~```
Stanzas cascading down
words & structures formin
That this simple man doesn’t understand
Besides me today,
As I lay here,
Formless an torn,
broken into dust
blowin out on the wind
```~~~… …~~~```
I been told
every mans heart
grows cold
His mind gradually dark,
I know I let you down again… sweet darlin’s…
I am still fallin
breathless & torn,
formless,
Here, in mine Sagittarius December,
```~~… … …~~~```
Stanzas cascading down
words & structures formin
That this simple man doesn’t understand
Besides me today,
As I lay here,
Formless an torn,
broken into dust
blowin out on the wind
```~~~… …~~~```
I been told
every mans heart
grows cold
His mind gradually dark,
I know I let you down again… sweet darlin’s…
I am still fallin
breathless & torn,
formless,
Here, in mine Sagittarius December,
```~~… … …~~~```
Published 5th Apr 2024
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5th Apr 2024 1:55pm
For a 3 minutes write, this is amazing. The sorrow, the feelings for her, the beauty pours out. Wonderful poem Ed.
