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white irises
those spirits
stood,
formed
their scene,
their naked
refreshing
wild arrays,
each communed
together,
to fuse
precisely,
polished white
mouths,
those columns
aching
to smile.
stood,
formed
their scene,
their naked
refreshing
wild arrays,
each communed
together,
to fuse
precisely,
polished white
mouths,
those columns
aching
to smile.
Published 15th Mar 2024
Author's Note
watching from my deck yesterday, i noticed the neighbor's white irises were blooming. why are mine all purple?
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15th Mar 2024 11:29am
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15th Mar 2024 9:15pm
thank you delia. maybe we will be reading about your cherry blossoms.
Anonymous
16th Mar 2024 2:51pm
Never smelled a white iris but purple smells rich & decadent. Vibrant seems more appealing somehow.
16th Mar 2024 6:45pm
17th Mar 2024 2:39am
I love how you take the everyday of your life and transform it into something special for the rest of us. Far too often I walk on by a poem hiding within the smallest of things. Of all the poems I've come across here at DUP, you have shown the greatest improvement. I remain in awe.
17th Mar 2024 4:34am
