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My cousin
My cousin goes in a bar wrapps herself up
And wants to be the center of attention
She wants every guy to scream and moan at the sight of her face
I wan to sit in the corner of the room
Left alone
Untouched by anyone
Observe anyone as a ghost
I often think about that
Which of us is ubnormal
I think I am
And wants to be the center of attention
She wants every guy to scream and moan at the sight of her face
I wan to sit in the corner of the room
Left alone
Untouched by anyone
Observe anyone as a ghost
I often think about that
Which of us is ubnormal
I think I am
Published 13th Mar 2024
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13th Mar 2024 8:13pm
If I was there, i would rather talk to you. Your interesting and cool. Great poem.
13th Mar 2024 10:07pm
13th Mar 2024 10:35pm
there is nothing wrong with you. sometimes i like to have myself unnoticed in a crowd
13th Mar 2024 11:04pm
Yes I guess so. Sometimes we think what we think. It depends very much on the mood also. Thank you for stopping by and sharing a thought with me.
14th Mar 2024 4:40am
Dear AM,
I appreciated your poem greatly. This reminded me of many a night during college. Just sitting in a corner observing. Great subject. Well written.
H🌷
I appreciated your poem greatly. This reminded me of many a night during college. Just sitting in a corner observing. Great subject. Well written.
H🌷
14th Mar 2024 1:04pm
Yes observing is a very joyful experience. Anytime I find out something or think about something it makes my day. It is fun and cute. Thank you for stopping by and sharing a thought with me.
14th Mar 2024 8:56pm
A great poem with passion and a clear vision of the dichotomy that wanting and hiding can be held inside
Richard
Richard
15th Mar 2024 1:28pm
What an original point of view....yes I want and in the meantime I am hiding. But I am still there. Thank you for stopping by.
