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Self
Sometimes I want to escape from myself
I get tired of its requests and rhymes
But the next morning I go back there
Where can I go anyway
I got this inside of my head
And it is exquisite
My luxury cloth
In it I can be free
Whoever I want to be.
I get tired of its requests and rhymes
But the next morning I go back there
Where can I go anyway
I got this inside of my head
And it is exquisite
My luxury cloth
In it I can be free
Whoever I want to be.
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Re: Re. Self
4th Mar 2024 3:16pm
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4th Mar 2024 3:46pm
I can tell you are far more complex than any pleasantry I leave as a comment. Doing my best to understand the largest theme and reply supportively.
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Re: Re. Self
4th Mar 2024 7:46pm
I love you commenting my dear. I write as a solitary and I miss creative friends. It is such a pleasure to share a words or two during the day with friends with the same interests. This is the only thing that matters in the end. Also I share in a very personal way, and I am nude here. I feel lighter when I comminicate these things.
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4th Mar 2024 4:22pm
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5th Mar 2024 11:23am
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5th Mar 2024 12:13pm
I find myself very often in other people poetries too. You have been there too, I say to myself. Hugs dear.
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6th Mar 2024 9:49pm